Many young people nowadays are imitating celebrities in sports and movies. In your opinion, is this good or bad? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Celebrities-emulating phenomenon not only has been disputed among scholars, but it has been presently accepted as one of the most individuals contemporary challengeable case also, which both famous characters and their fan are responsible in face of it. However, celebrities perform a substantial role to prevention their public irregular comportments and deeds, as well as increasing and decelerate its consequences upon their followers.
Celebrities’ both popularity and esteem as the most significant factors have been constantly attracted youngsters; however, they never illustrate those paths which have been winded up prosperity. For instance Christano Ronaldo’s - the most famed soccer player - Instagram had been entirely demonstrating his luxury life and his fashionable clothes, though, hard and endless endeavors as his achievement contributors have never been represented. Thus, following his social media pages and simulating his social activities never changes our popularity and life advancement.
In other hand, contemporary world have been heaped of plenty famous characters engaged by fashion companies such as Gucci, Lacoste, Dior and so on, to exhibit their latest fashion goods. Some distinguished movie characters have been paying by fashion brands over 10 million dollars per year to advertise their new products and they merely need our emulating to be more and more rich. Imitating celebrities has not only no beneficial aspects through our lives, but definitely had not been affordable also.
To sum up, simulating famed characters on social medias and their appeared life by people, never aid them to achieve their triumphs, unless by following their efforts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...face of it. However, celebrities perform a substantial role to prevention their p...
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Line 9, column 500, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... but definitely had not been affordable also. To sum up, simulating famed char...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.852 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24315858407 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1915024511 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.555555556 104.977214359 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0215257137792 0.242375264174 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0119556966619 0.0925447433944 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0165392154757 0.071462118173 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0133432236461 0.151781067708 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00978841687079 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 12.6369458128 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 53.1260098522 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 11.5310837438 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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