Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the world today, advertisement is gradually becoming a successful tool for promoting a product or service.
A good number of people believe that advertising of commodities is relevant to assisting individuals to learn about new merchandise. While others are of the view that advertisement is a gamic used to deceive the public into purchasing items that they end up not using.
This essay supports the latter part of the argument and will expatiate further.
In order to promote a product, companies tend to give a false representation of their commodities by only showing the bright side. This, in turn, deceives the unsuspecting viewer into purchasing the item and in the long run, cannot use it to achieve what was required. To illustrate, there has been a rise in the advertisement for herbal teas and coffee for weight loss. Experts believe that the only unaversive way to lose weight is by eating a healthy diet and exercising regularly.
Furthermore, people who have gone ahead to buy these herbal teas tend to abandon it when they realize that, what was depicted in the advert is not achievable.
Secondly, Advertisements may imprint products in the minds of individuals to assume they need the product to survive.
For instance, students in higher institutions feel it is necessary to own the latest smart phone in the market whereas those extra features advertised, are not necessary for their day-to-day activities.
They also use it to show social class which is irrelevant to their studies and can promote inferiority complex in those that cannot afford to get the most recent smartphone.
In conclusion, advertisements depict only the positive sides of a merchandise which is deceptive to get the customer to purchase goods that are not needed by them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14726027397 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97458270024 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6923076923 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.615384615 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155234326476 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554901875871 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463918013782 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065716115162 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047001452031 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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