Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that television can affect people directly or indirectly. However, a plethora of people contents that movies and television play a negative role for young people but others disagree. Not surprisingly, the number of the issue over this controversies is overwhelmed. Among this controversy, I personally believe that television is one of the causes of the degradation of young people's behave. I feel this way for several reasons I will expound in the subsequent followings.
To commence with, although television provides us with many recent news but several programs really harmful for the young. To be more specific, some program like crime patrol, action sence which is actually vulnerable for young people. For instance, recently I heard that a young teenage group murdered a girl in action film style. They also claimed that they got this idea from the crime program. Moreover, different Bengali serials are mostly made with relationship conflict and research showed that the divorce rate is increased among young people because of those serials.
Furthermore, Tv programs, movies shows a sophisticated lifestyle which is directly making an impact on the young generation. Moreover, the luxurious house, excessive ornamental decoration, dresses, cars are making the young generation greedy. For getting this lifestyle they are involving in illegal activities and trying to achieve it at any cost. For particular, one of the Bengali popular serial Pakhi and with the name of the main character a dress style enter into the market. The dress is expensive and also collects much popularity. So, one of the young girls wanted that dress but her father was not so wealthy that can afford the dress. She forced her father for buying but he did not buy. As s result, that young girl was trying to suicide. She actually did that because this dress is also a sign of status or otherwise she will be insulted by her rich friend.
To recapitulate, though TV is a source of knowledge but it actually indirectly affects the young people which is difficult to perceive. So, young people should aware of this consequence and try to avoid harmful program and should watch the beneficial program.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...greedy. For getting this lifestyle they are involving in illegal activities and trying to ach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, for instance, i feel, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13850415512 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72932339434 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565096952909 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5282689983 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144158095074 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448292640008 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437104298232 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976111384226 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511742179398 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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