You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter•describe the problem with the equipment•explain how this problem is affecting yo

Essay topics:

You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.

Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter

• describe the problem with the equipment

• explain how this problem is affecting your work

• say what you want the shop or company to do

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about the WIFI router I purchased from your company a few months ago. Unfortunately, it suddenly stopped working and my office work is getting affected with this issue. I am hoping for the immediate replacement of the same.

The NETGEAR A 50 was working properly for 1 month from the date I purchased the same from your company. For 2 day it is creating a problem as it stops working in between and again I have to restart the router.

I work from home as a freelancer and my work involves uninterrupted internet connection. I have several ongoing projects which have to be completed within the deadline in order to maintain the client base. Since my work is totally dependent on internet, due to the issues with the WIFI router I am unable to complete my project with in the stipulated time frame and it will affect the organisation.

I suggest to either repair the router in nest two days or replace it with the new product.

I hope to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely

Prabhpreet Kaur

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66844919786 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68532275105 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609625668449 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7431305196 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3636363636 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243224180075 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850784784979 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361972869884 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114390378623 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512344278841 0.0580467560999 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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