You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents.
Write a letter to a councilor. In your letter:
•Introduce yourself.
•Describe the problem.
•Say what you think the council should do about the situation.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the recent changes to sound pollution regulations in the local region of Mumbai. I am James Smith, a resident of Ventura society in north-western region of Mumbai. I hope you will consider the situation favourably.
Let me explain the situation in detail. As people are now allowed to play music on loudspeakers up to mid-night for house parties or wedding celebrations, it leads to unwanted noise till 1 am. Although sound limit is defined, it still disturbs the children, who are trying to sleep early to go school early next morning. Moreover, some people who are working from home are also not able to focus on their work or attend meetings with clients peacefully. This results in detrimentally affecting not only personal but professional life of residents.
Would you kindly change the regulation for 9pm cut-off to discourage this practice of noise pollution late night. It will help public to carry on their daily life in peace.
Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
James Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iety in north-western region of Mumbai. I hope you will consider the situation fa...
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Line 23, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours faithfully, James Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17877094972 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84409671331 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698324022346 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3688156014 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12699849515 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432087678258 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466608248272 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833997765396 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327955675062 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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