A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Several individuals agree that animals are the most important part of the ecosystem and should not be killed for satisfying the selfish needs of humans, whereas, others have the notion that it should be legal to use animals for fulfilling a plethora of requirements such as for research and consumption. In my opinion, I do believe that animals have the right to live freely and should not be abused by society.
Many citizens consent that animals are an essential part of the food chain and if they are heinously killed by people it will disrupt the entire hierarchy which in turn will affect the environment of the country, making it difficult for the community to survive. Moreover, people are killing animals indiscriminately, because of which some animals were extinct while other are on the verge of extinction, affecting the bio-diversity of the nation which is essential for human health. As species disappear, infectious diseases increase in humans and throughout the animal kingdom so disappearance affects the chances of survival. To exemplify, a research report in 2008 by World Animal Protection showed that more than 35% of animals such as elephants, lions, tigers, and crocodiles are hunted for their skin and ivory tusk used for making clothes and jewellery thus, making them the endangered species.
However, some have the opinion that it is acceptable to kill animals to fulfill various needs of society. Animals are used in research projects by scientists to find cures of several diseases which in turn has saved lives of thousands of people. Furthermore, animals are considered important for producing and providing food to satisfy hunger. Without them there will be no food and people will die because of starvation. To illustrate, fishes, crabs, and prawns are included in the daily diets of people as they are the main source of proteins essential for humans.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that God has created humans and animals and just as humans have feelings animals also have emotions and they feel pain and terror. The society should not kill or mistreat animals for their benefits
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as for, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12103746398 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71902589994 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527377521614 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2836843951 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.692307692 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432493171918 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15492298999 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640991173588 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281805878274 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408748266557 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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