A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Education is the symbol of harmony and knowledge. Which clearly portray the outline of country ie. their devlopmemt their achievments. But this all happens when we give it to students. Students are the future of any country which when get a proper knowledge of interest can do more than better.
we should provide every possible way of knowledge which can help grown up the qualities of student. but it would be better to provide cirriculum to student in which his area of interest is so he can devlop himself in particular direction to achieve his goal.
To provide knowledge of interesting area can grow up student so that he can perform in well manner in college.most of people using their area of interest have devloped and support their nation for example mark zubercas had done well in his area of interest , anil ambani who was in high hopes to do better with business strategies in childhood come to his dreams true which not only fulfill his dreams but also support nation.
i would like to conclude that it would be better to provide cirriculum regarding area of interest rather than provide same cirriculum nationwise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is the symbol of harmony and knowledge. Which clearly portray the outline of country ...
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Suggestion: We
... interest can do more than better. we should provide every possible way of kn...
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Suggestion:
...very possible way of knowledge which can help grown up the qualities of student....
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Suggestion:
...hich can help grown up the qualities of student. but it would be better to provi...
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Suggestion: But
...elp grown up the qualities of student. but it would be better to provide cirriculu...
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Suggestion:
... which his area of interest is so he can devlop himself in particular direction ...
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Suggestion:
...of interest is so he can devlop himself in particular direction to achieve his g...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...e can perform in well manner in college.most of people using their area of interest have devlo...
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Suggestion: ,
...as had done well in his area of interest , anil ambani who was in high hopes to do...
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Suggestion: I
...is dreams but also support nation. i would like to conclude that it would be...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...is dreams but also support nation. i would like to conclude that it would be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, well, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 2235.4752809 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 442.535393258 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89690721649 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57952286258 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 704.065955056 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.812891262 60.3974514979 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086038487658 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316629997964 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027521315431 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503289722465 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180199366953 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 100.480337079 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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