In twenty years there will be fewer cars than there is today
The car industry has changed very rapidly in the last 10 years. Large car companies have experimented with new efficient cars, electric cars, etc, I personally believe that in the near future there will be more cars than today. I will explain my thesis in the following paragraphs.
First of all, let’s think about our country USA. There are more people every day in each city, some have immigrated from the country, others from far away countries. This new population creates a demand for new and old cars. Moreover, public transport still very much the same as it was 10 years ago. Few new routes and the fleet of buses also the same as before. Consequently, whether we like it or now, in the USA we need to buy cars to commute to work, study, or travel for pleasure. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I moved here from Colombia, in 2007, I was determined to keep using public transport just like I did back home. Despite my good intentions, soon, I found that it was too much of a hassle. Within the first three months, I end up buying my first car. My wife followed not long after I bought my first auto. In addition, my son is now a sophomore in high school and is already asking for his car.
The way I see it, now we are a that has been 12 years in the country and soon we will have three cars in the family.
Second, let’s think about the world. In general, cars are getting cheaper and more affordable worldwide. Companies are producing more economic cars in order for the rising middle class to have the joy to own a car. The emerging middle class of developing countries, like Colombia, my home country, find themselves buying cars as an alternative way of transportation. For instance, back home, public transportation is efficient. but every day it is more uncomfortable to use it. It is getting very crowded. Consequently, people are choosing to buy cars because it is more comfortable.
By way of conclusion, in the near future, no matter if the cars are going to be electric, fuel-efficient or hybrids. We will have a lot more cars than we have today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 434, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...me, public transportation is efficient. but every day it is more uncomfortable to u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, as to, for instance, in addition, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57783641161 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67914896867 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538258575198 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6422118266 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7307692308 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5769230769 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73076923077 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221272624095 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541786194859 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714909105549 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165404000447 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896483199927 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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