Reading books is better pastime than watching movies
Reading book has been one of my favourite pastime. Being an avid reader I know the importance and impact a book can make to a person's life. For me, it all started with casually browsing books in my school library when I was just 10 years old. That time it was a part of the new curiculum for us to read one book a week. And so reluctantly I happen to pick a book and was sure that I would end up hating it. But no, it happened to be a completely a different thing! I happened to enjoy the book, and so much that I went back to get more books on the same genre - mystery. Till date this genre is my favorite and my rst book was Nancy Drew. Well this was my personal experience on how reading happen to become my pasttime.
Today, I do happen to do various other things during my free time like painting, pottery and watching movies. Watching a good old documentary or war movies is something that I would love to do over the weekends. But the count such movies is low, its too dicult to nd a movie as good as a biography written on it, Most of the movies just fail to capture the essence, the feel that one get while reading the books. The level of detailing that goes writing to explain the pain the Nazi concentration camps inicted on the Jews, making a movie can never do so.
Reading increasing your intellectual and creative parts of your brain. Genre availabel in books are more than in movies. These days most of the movies are either romcom or based on violence. That feel-good feeling after watching a light-hearted movie usually last for a short time whereas as a good book can actually help a person a lot - genre like self help, philosophy.
Its based on personal choice, some prefer watching a short movie to lighten their mood whereas some prefer getting lost and explore new world with new book
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ortance and impact a book can make to a persons life. For me, it all started with casua...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ends. But the count such movies is low, its too dicult to nd a movie as good as a b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33235294118 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37989423789 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555882352941 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8966517968 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6470588235 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291726906241 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939678793525 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450804357257 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170547458582 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035410459278 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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