Some people feel that entertainers ( e.g. film stars, musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? What other jobs should be paid highly?
SUPERSTARS HAVE ALWAYS BEEN A MAJOR POINT OF INTEREST AMONGST THE AUDIENCE. THERE WAGES HAVE BEEN A DEBATABLE ISSUE SINCE AGES. MAJORITY OF PEOPLE HAVE THIS OPINION THAT THEY ARE HIGHLY PAID FOR THEIR JOB. I STRONGLY OPPOSE THIS KIND OF BELIEF AND THROW SOME LIGHT ON THIS ASPECT.
GLAMOUR INDUSTRY IS BELIEVED TO BE ONE OF THE HIGH MAINTENANCE SECTOR. THE PROTAGONIST NEEDS TO INVEST HEFTY AMOUNT TO SHOWCASE THEIR LIFESTYLE. IN OTHER WORDS, EVERY PUBLIC APPEARANCE OF SUCH PERSON IS UNDER MEDIA COVERAGE WHICH COMPELS THEM TO STAY UPDATED IN EVERY ASPECT. WHETHER IT IS THERE CLOTHES, ACCESSORIES, HOUSE OR EVEN CARS ALL OF THEM ARE KEENLY NOTICED AND JUDGED ACCORDINGLY BY THE PAPPARAZIS. IN ADDITION TO THIS, SINCE THEY ARE PROMOTERS FOR FITNESS THEY OUGHT TO STAY FIT AS WELL. AS A RESULT OF THIS, STARS ARE BOUND TO ENROLL IN SOME HIGHLY EQUIPPED FITNESS CENTERS OR OWN THEM. FOOD PLAYS A VITAL ROLE IN HEALTH. HENCE, SOURCES WHICH ARE ORGANIC, LESS FATTY ARE WIDELY USED BY THE ACTORS.
RESOURCES FOR LIFESTYLE AND FITNESS GO HEAVY ON THE FAMOUS PERSONALITIES POCKET. EVEN THOUGH THERE INCOME GOES AT A HIGHER LEVEL, THESE EXPENSES COMPENSATE THE INPUT. THEREFORE, I BELIEVE ENTERTAINERS ARE PAID ON A SUFFICIENT SLAB. THE AMOUNT MAY LOOK HUGE BUT MOST OF IT IS USED AS AN INVESTMENT IN THEIR WORK.
OTHER THAN THE ON SCREEN HERO’S THERE ARE SOME OFF-SCREEN STARS AS WELL WHO DESERVE TO HIRED EQUALLY. SOCIAL SERVICES HAVE BEEN A BOON TO SOCIETY. SUCH SERVICES ARE DONE IN SOME PROFESSIONS SUCH AS ARMY, NAVY, ETC. DELEGATES OF THESE SECTORS PERFORM NOBLE WORK BY PROTECTING OUR COUNTRY, FIGHTING FOR US BY RISKING THEIR LIVES. WHEN THESE MENS PERFORM THEIR DUTIES, THERE FAMILIES GO THROUGH A LOT OF TROUBLESOME SITUATIONS. SO, I BELIEVE THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD ALLOCATE A HIGHER INCOME LEVEL TO LET THE MEN WORK WITH A SIGH OF RELIEF AT THE FIELD.THIS WILL NOT ONLY DO JUSTICE TO OUR COUNTRY REPRESENTATIVES BUT ALSO PROVIDE A BETTER LIFE AND OPPORTUNITIES TO THERE FAMILY MEMBERS.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88269794721 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60054643043 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618768328446 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5083586536 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6818181818 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119771179014 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313428446763 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049744659543 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066596744941 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144923812014 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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