With the increasing use and development of new technology,many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform
Nowdays in our thriving world the pace of our life at rapid stage.Many inventions are being created by peoples hands.Most of them are being used in educational purposes,medicine and sport as well.Scientis have developed various creations that facilitating peoples live an d work.Furthemore,there are bad side-effect of it that should be noticed.In mu point of view advantages outweigh disadvantage because of it comfortability and availibility.For instance,owing to them the quality of performances are improved and they become more emotional.
Firstly,technology is enhancing day-by-day.In our world big part of population are anti-social,egoistical or shy.For them presenting performances is being hardship or difficult to deal with it.Moreover,some renditions are complicated to manifest in front of people or the y are troublesome.For these people it great choice.They can utilize technology from distant to solve these problems and they can be sure about the condition.
Secondly,technological advices such as projector,monitor,display and speakers are very danger.We retain from our childhood that majority of people is being killed because of them.They were accidence when unwilling mistakes happened and it cause peoples life.If people more concentrate on advices the rule of using or warning the dangers the would be less dread and it can be beneficial.
In conclusion,i would say that technology is not a bad factor but there would be some misunderstanding if people do not follow the rules
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79820627803 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.18153199645 2.80592935109 149% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.923428311 49.4020404114 301% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 323.25 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.75 20.7667163134 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.75 7.06120827912 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142799446249 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849314167588 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027648464796 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849314167588 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027648464796 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 13.0946893788 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.27 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.25 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.18 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 9.78957915832 352% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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