the charts below give information on the ages of the population of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Information on the proportions of three age ranges in Yemen and Italy over a 50-year period is provided in the pie charts. Overall, the percentages of under 14-year-old people are predicted to fall until 2050 .
As regards Yemen, it is forecast that the figure of under-14 group, which was about 50 percent in 2000, will have decreased by 13 percent by 2050. In contrast, the proportions of 15-59 years and over 60 years are predicted to rise, with these constituting 57.3 percent and 5.7 percent of the population respectively.
Regarding Italy, the proportion of over 60 years old individuals is projected to double approximately until 2050, standing considerably higher than the figure for Yemen. By contrast, by 2050, it is predicted that levels for under-14 age category will have dropped marginally by roughly 3 percent while figures for 15-59 age range will have dipped significantly by 15 percent.
To sum up, it can be inferred whereas a modest proportion of Yemen's population will have reached their retirement, a noticeable percentage of Italy's population will have retired at the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, whereas, while, as regards, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1978021978 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95082979152 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60989010989 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6010719294 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156970650728 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799843179599 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427134232744 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101855563644 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316215274561 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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