Car
There is no doubt that car has become important part of the humanlife so without car people feel unsecure and incomplete but few individual believe that car has the more drawbacks than the profits . I am agree in this statement.I will discuss my points of view before reaching at any conclusion.
To embark upon,car has plethora of disadvantages.firstly,car create pollution which is harmful for health as well as it ash particles occur various type of disease like asthma ,lung cancer .In the year of 2017 ,research conduct the survey which has shown that due to car pollution 70%people was suffered from asthma disease.secondly, car also reduce the non renewable source such as oil .so if renewable source completely lost ,it cannot comes never again .
However ,there are myraid advantages for using the car.car help the person going one place to the another .It has own privacy.person feel secure in the own vehicles.Morever,person can reach the destination in the few hours or minutes .so,it can save the time .In addition,sick person or disabled can gets more benefits in tha car.
In conclusion,car has more benefits for people but we cannot overlooked the drawback.so it must use in the limited way
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08542713568 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3353079471 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698492462312 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.108715988 49.4020404114 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.4 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8 20.7667163134 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 26.2 7.06120827912 371% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457816304267 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242190867455 0.084324248473 287% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147236727259 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279866645672 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637820495721 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.