The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by ismlaydmr on Tue, 12/31/2019 - 17:59

The line graph illustrates average carbon dioxide (CO2) emitted by a person in four different countries (the uk, Sweden, Italy and Portugal) decadly by ten-year periods from 1967 to 2007.

Overall, there was an upward trend in carbon dioxide emissions in Portugal and italy whereas a downward trend was seen Sweden and the uk throughout the four-decade period. Furthermore, it is important to say that the highest emission amount was spread in the uk while The least amount of carbon dioxide emission was emitted in Portugal.

it is worth notice that the carbon dioxide emission in Portugal was almost only 1 metric tonnes in 1967, however this amount rose significantly and reach nearly 5.5 tonnes by increasing over five times. In Sweden, average carbon dioxide emissions started by almost 9 tonnes and increased dramatically throughout the first decade til 1977 by picking 10.2 tonnes, after that, there was seen a rapid decline and it dipped with approximately 5 tonnes. As to carbon dioxide emission in Italy, it doubled from 4 tonnes to 8 tonnes by rising significantly in the given period. Finally, there was a slight decrease from 11 tonnes to 9 tonnes in the UK.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... emission was emitted in Portugal. it is worth notice that the carbon dioxide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02551020408 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66447700952 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9701793569 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199285202627 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106454055207 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686552142729 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16559589746 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588079494214 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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