The increase in the production of comsumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem.
Nowadays,the fast – paced manufacture of consumer goods inflicts a heavy price in the environment.This essay will discuss several causes and suggest some solutions to tackle this issue.
The production of chemical by-products and wastes disposing from manufacturing process are the driving force behind the environmental degradation. As the more good are produced, the greater quantities of toxic wastes from factories releasing into nature.The resulting contaminated water sources and polluted air can put an end to the marine and terrestrial’s lives. Moreover, in order to meet the ever-increasing need , not only thousands of rainforest have been cut down,but also natural resources are almost depleted.As the result,fossil fuel like coal, oils are running out and many species are doomed to extinction.
Actions must be taken immediately in order to minimize the negative effects on environment stemming from increasing amount of products.First of all, government should introduce laws to limit exploiting the natural resources. In this way, they will be much encouraged to use renewable energy which cause no harms to the environment during production process. For instance, in many countries, authorities offer tax breaks for enterprises using solar energy.Second of all, use of eco-friendlier materials need to be promoted among manufactories. For example, a giant corporation Vincom, recently replace plastic bags with reusable alternatives made of materials like paper or cotton.
In conclusion,the increase in the production of consumer goods is inevitable trend, given the fast growth in the human population. Because of its severely impact on the environment, governments and companies should take the responsibilities to address this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83011583012 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41445760115 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698841698842 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0795871124 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224910261328 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784592326784 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426751643568 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126980403465 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139645304323 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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