Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
“Every coin has two sides,” says an old proverb. It is said that progress always takes man forward on the path, but progress too has its flip side and is not always beneficial. Every advance made by mankind has caused some harm. I partially agree with the topic.
When we are talking about the progress, there are some discoveries by a human being which brings a huge part in progress, also become dangerous for the human being. And this thing indicates that progress is not always good sometimes it tends toward distraction. For example, radioactive energy and nuclear energy, both energies are a big source of energy but also they contain the power to destroy all human beings.
Additionally, we can talk about the leading technologies which make work efficient and advance but on the other hand that affected on humans brain and it weakens the power of the human brain. For example, calculator; humans use the calculator for simple calculations and do not take efforts to solve simple calculations. Also, progress will affect human behavior and attitude, people suddenly changed when they get experienced the progress.
Moreover, sometimes progress is good it will bring positive changes and motivate people for doing their best and also it will help to find more advanced things and help to give them their best. For example, we can talk about the businessman who is working hard his progress motivates himself and also give him the strength to work hard. Secondly, we can talk about students; their progress in studies brings positive confidence in them and helps them to work hard. From all this, we can say that progress is good to motivate ourselves.
Therefore, we can conclude that progress is not always good sometimes it brings some negative changes in-person behavior and also it can destroy human beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03278688525 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56388411338 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534426229508 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1174489025 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145111875805 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592847444814 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482095674755 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904027342739 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157217512447 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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