Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree?
Had we ever think that where sport came from? obviously 'no'. Why people are introducing critical sports and competing. What could be possible prospect to prevent them?
Who is the caveman? Our ancestors, why they ran and shoot any animal? Simply they want to survive. The condition of the modern man resemble to older one's; to feed themselves as well as family is essential in survival era. The competition of materialistic approach is high due to this they start looking for a job.which could not possible for some extent because lack of education. This inability address to killing games. Their is a suitable example, UFC, it is called ring boxing without rules, no regulations means it can consider death while arena fight. This all sounds good for those who want to be affluent with fighting talent.
Reasons aside, lets move towards remedies how they can rid of? The major think that have to do is recruited them and offer them a good pay scale. It will aid them to carry out their basic needs. We cannot ban these sports but government have to summit on it and come across with more strict rules because while playing in Olympic if someone lost his or her life other players will be discouraged by this situation and that will be a big full stop for their Carrier.
Hence, either I am not expert or experienced but their are some illegal sports that should be banned such as: street fight, bull fighting and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6812749004 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35955481576 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693227091633 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.8804571271 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4375 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169002256659 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405570640978 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470278892118 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107625433349 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411968661697 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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