Mozart school is the best place for kids to learn music

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...s of ability and if they will be around equally as talented students who will push them to...
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Line 5, column 645, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... Welcoming all is a lovely princple but doesnt equate to being the best environment fo...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 271, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...e ideal. For students who have already know or have experience in an instrument or ...
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Line 9, column 344, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...trument or style it possibly means they cant get the depth and expertise they are lo...
^^^^
Line 9, column 456, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... a bredth of knowledge can only enhance ones musical apperciation, and creativity; s...
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Line 17, column 448, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jumped'.
Suggestion: jumped
...here is what styles or instruments have jump started careers. If all those professi...
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Line 17, column 583, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to jazz'
Suggestion: to jazz
...ot be good for someone looking to learn jazz piano. However, if their alumni are wo...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, look, may, second, so, then, third, well, while, as to, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 19.6327345309 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.9520958084 154% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 11.1786427146 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 28.8173652695 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2936.0 2260.96107784 130% => OK
No of words: 616.0 441.139720559 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76623376623 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98190197535 4.56307096286 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59584165759 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 204.123752495 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430194805195 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 909.9 705.55239521 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 19.7664670659 142% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2560281692 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.70786347227 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.20758483034 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248568309471 0.218282227539 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838736491702 0.0743258471296 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107824475387 0.0701772020484 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159689349015 0.128457276422 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519863933726 0.0628817314937 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 98.500998004 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 617 350
No. of Characters: 2870 1500
No. of Different Words: 261 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.984 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.652 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.531 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 190 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 129 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.036 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.279 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.274 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.488 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.063 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5