''A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college''
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would not ba advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position
Formal education is indeed an important tool that is needed to shapen one's mind, mindset, help achieve one's goals, and on the long run, could lead to the development of a nation or state. But, adequate care needs to be taken over the course of attaining a good formal education. Placing requirements on such an important weapon as this could lead to confuscations and in turn have a number of negative outcomes- which could include wastage of resources and the most important resource of all, time.
By imposing a curriculum on the indegenes of a nation up until college, there is an assumption that everyone has equal strengths, which is definitely not the case. For illustration, I have a strong affinity for Chemistry and Engineering, and specifically found it extremely hard to comprehend courses such as English Literature. This, I was able to find out because I was given the choice to take all of the couses that cut through Sciences, Arts, and Commercial/Social Sciences. By so doing, I was able to recognize Art as my weakest point, hence choosing Sciences as my focus for Senior High School.
Not only will mandating students to take the same courses make it hard to identify one's strength, doing this will make it hard to even focus on what one would eventually study in college. In a situation where the national curicullum includes all subjects from the aforementioned three major fields, there would not be the time or avenue for other students to build on the fundamental knowledge that is required of them. Say, one wants to study Chemical Enghineering, but simply because it had been imposed on them to take all courses,he would have wasted time on courses that are of no relevance to his intended field of study.
Futhermore, requiring everyone to take the same courses, while exposing students to undesired courses that turn out to be extremely difficult for the ( as Literature was for me), could be extremely discouraging, especially to pupils that had little liking for formal education , and as a result, may end up dropping out. This is highly likely to happen in my home country, Nigeria, where a good percentage of young people already had a mindset that formal education is difficult and would rather be on the streets. This, for any nation, is an undesirable outcome.
In conclusion, formal education should be as flexible as possible as it should be an avenue for people to develop themselves, discover themselves and overall shapen them to become who they want to be. Imposing curriculum on the people defeats this important purpose. The only situation where that should even be considered is when there is an urgent need for the nation to develop its people in a specific aspect, which should even be a choice as no government has the right to force people into doing things that have consequences on their personal lives.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take 66
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, while, as for, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 485.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88453608247 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80329160716 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511340206186 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 757.8 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8241384963 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0625 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3125 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162306437054 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056789616812 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042684856796 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091164064194 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190430475034 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.