Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others. however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is widely argued that the parents are the most important agent of proper socialization for children. In other side, some people have a contrary beliefs. They assume that schooling teaches children a wide range of knowledge and sufficient social skills. In my opinion, I believe that socialization is not entirely responsibility of parents. However, as soon as children entering school they continuously learn precise social skills.
Recent research shows us, family is the initial stage that can teach striking features and proper behaviors to children. One of the primary reason is that at least until the start of schooling, parents play a key role to treat their children. It means that children learn continuously the kind of environment that their parents create for them. Values, attitudes and prejudice on themself and others are the most essential example that parents teach consciously to their children.
However, there also some opponent views which claim on this idea that school is the good place to learning socialization in correct way. One important issues is that school is vital in social development of children. For instance, base on recent information which has been released in nature magazine intellectual growth, physical contact, verbal simulation are the most impressive output of children which can surge obviously in characteristic of children in society.
In conclusion, while parents are the most essential factor to increase the performance of children’s behaviors in society, schooling can simultaneously play crucial role to enhance this critical attributes in children. In my opinion, I believe that the combination of parents and school is the promising solution for the sufficient socialization of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69348659004 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1818817801 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.874888466 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 297.2 106.682146367 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.2 20.7667163134 251% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.4 7.06120827912 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269158991983 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156056420215 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238572397855 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15450320619 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220202274264 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 13.0946893788 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.24 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.61 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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