Nowadays many people work from home. Some think it is beneficial, while others think it may distract the family routine. What is your opinion?
In moderns days, people strive to keep perfect work-life balance. Whereas many believe that it is advantageous to work from home, others argue that this program may disrupt their personal schedule. I vehemently support the former view for some empirical reasons.
To begin with, those who support the latter view may consider that working from home may result in turbulence between personal and professional time. This is because when people operate from home, they have to be active all the time as their employers often reach out to them anytime for updates and support as the working hours are often not decided. For instance, Typical office hours are 9 AM to 6 PM and employers tend not to expect their employees to work beyond these hours, which is not a case while working from the home. If a person chooses to work from home permanently, it would have a detrimental impact on his personal time. This would result in unnecessary family tension and may cause a mental disturbance.
On the contrary, I believe that the prime benefit of working from home is that an individual can work at his\her own pace. Unlike the office, waking up early in the morning is not required as a person can decide their work schedule as per their routine, which further allows them to spend long quality time with their family. The main need is to prepare a proper schedule for working hours rather than working randomly whenever required, and this also enhances their productivity. This way of living would also develop a great bond between family members. To exemplify, If an employees' personal life is healthy, the productivity would automatically go up.
In conclusion, although it is a daunting process for many people to balance their time between family and office when they work from home which put them into family crisis, freedom to work as per their lifestyle and staying with loved-ones most of the times, in my opinion, are the perks of this system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 574, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an employee' or simply 'employees'?
Suggestion: an employee; employees
...etween family members. To exemplify, If an employees personal life is healthy, the productiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88288288288 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49357406253 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537537537538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.310035082 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.142857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229544836908 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885762030019 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557464317832 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164015777085 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466912437887 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.