Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Overall, many believe that moving known companies and industries to rural areas is more advantageous than locating in urban places. Instead, this essay will discuss how the drawbacks of this statement outweigh the benefits.
There are many reasons why locating in the suburb has many disadvantages .To elaborate, switching to a regional location has been known to be a significant factor of deforestation. Furthermore, in order to be able to build corporates; land is needed which is why an enormous number of plants are removed. Consequently, the ecosystem is disturbed which is why biodiversity can be severely harmed. In addition, the percentage pollution of the air will skyrocket; due to the huge amounts of harmful gases being emitted from the industries.
From another perspective there are also many positives to this topic. For instance, this can reduce the traffic congestion which has been a persistent issue in the 21st century; as less residents will be in the urban area as they would move out to the rural area where their work is newly located. Moreover, it will save a lot of space in the cities; which can be used to provide more facilities; for example more schools, parks, hospitals and more can be made for the citizens. Also it can help the rural areas to become more modern and provide many helpful outlets to them.
To conclude, switching manufacture’s place can be either a great decision or a horrible replacement. What’s more, this concept has to be thought about carefully before proceeding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun residents is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... and more can be made for the citizens. Also it can help the rural areas to become m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06746031746 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89408165344 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2098925195 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.416666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154526910365 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542555571299 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050350833783 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935311615851 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400178257464 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.