Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Finding characteristic of the society has always been an important issue for sociologist and government for understanding the society in deep and making correct decisions. While unerstanding the characteristic of heros of the society could provide a good insight of the population, nonetheless I could not accept the claim as it is and I explain my view now.
Understanding the specification of the ideal person may provide a prospective view of the belief of the indivisuals but in fact it might not be the best way. Due the the fact that people in the society have different idea about the ilfe so they could have different role model with various specification. Therefore, there is not just a role model for the whole of the society. On the other hand, some believe heros are just appropriate for a special skills. Take a sportman as an example, he might not be a role model for family life and he could have several defects in private life.
The reason which is provided is not persuasive. Due to the fact that nowdays people have more broaden view in comparison with the last decades. Most of them do not believe to any role model or hero and they think it is ridiculous and far from the logic of the world. Thus, some individuals do not have any role model even in their mind and may just follow some instructions of successful persons for a specific purpose.
Finally, the method which is explained in the claim could have some meirts and could provide a perfunctory view of the society but it could not be the best way for this purpose. These days there are a numerous of scientific methods that can be hold to find out the characters of the society. For example, experts provide questionaree to get a view of people in marriage.
In conclusion, although the claim could provide a beneficial method to find a veiw of the society's character, nevertheless it could not be the best way and there are some scientific methods that could prepare a comperehensive view of the society.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etheless I could not accept the claim as it is and I explain my view now. Unders...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... fact it might not be the best way. Due the the fact that people in the society have di...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... fact it might not be the best way. Due the the fact that people in the society have di...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
...eros are just appropriate for a special skills. Take a sportman as an example, he migh...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70200573066 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83149363046 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452722063037 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.127552911 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.21951772744 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224971468174 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790317668217 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435579307387 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131386811478 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410292972945 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etheless I could not accept the claim as it is and I explain my view now. Unders...
^^
Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... fact it might not be the best way. Due the the fact that people in the society have di...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... fact it might not be the best way. Due the the fact that people in the society have di...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
...eros are just appropriate for a special skills. Take a sportman as an example, he migh...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70200573066 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83149363046 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452722063037 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.127552911 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.21951772744 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224971468174 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790317668217 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435579307387 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131386811478 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410292972945 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.