Now a days international tourism is the biggest industry. It creates tension rather than understanding between people from different countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past decade, tourism industry has experienced unprecedented success all over the world. A general consensus exists that this contributes to stress between nations instead of establishing better perception among various cultures. I partially agree with this phenomenon
Firstly, one of the most salient reasons why travelling paves the way of understanding lies in the fact of communication. It is aptly illustrated while communicating and interacting with each other individuals gain an insight of each other's customs. This ultimately will foster bilateral friendship along with respect. Another notable point is that tourism lays the foundation for fiscal development. With the advent of aggressive marketing, this flourishing business has had inextricable link with a number of associated business. This might range from Airlines to the small gifts-shop in the region. Thus it had created a cornerstone of employment not only overseas, but also in the local areas. For example, some Asian tourists areas have already lifted out the quagmire of poverty. it is estimated that their children would have better education and welcoming attitudes towards the foreigners visiting their places. On no account, the vast majority of people should have experienced any pressure in this regard
Despite the above, valid reasons exists why a tension may emerge . Unfortunately, there are those in the minority group obsessed with huge financial gain by criminal activities. Smuggling, for an example, is taking the opportunity of the ubiquitous entry into the region. If this situation continues, the dire consequences might have created. Although precautions are available, individual worries whether government can demonstrate the aptitude.Furthermore, tourism is often deemed as a mode of cultural invasion. Although, the advent of social media is potentially dominating the concern, tourism could be associated.
To conclude, tourism is vastly fostering friendship and understanding among persons. The unwelcoming drawbacks of illicit products transportation can easily be countered by competent security services in the port- premises. Likewise, the link of cultural disruption is only a minor fact when compared to the enormous level of perception tourism brings among the individuals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, may, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78761061947 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18637345246 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654867256637 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9696830437 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088559665283 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238629146914 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249367570604 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544574399086 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146895047609 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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