Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is considered by many people that there should be equal opportunities for females in the nation's police department or army forces, while others argue that these types of occupations are not appropriate for women. I vehemently support the former view and explore these diverse approaches in this essay further.
To begin with, it can not be denied that women tend to be less competent when it comes to physical strength. That said, such jobs require a lot of work under harsh and draconian conditions, where the person usually needs to deal with dangerous criminals or the nation's enemies. For instance, In the police department, police personnel are often faced with heinous murderers at any time of the day. Thus, In order to deal with such crimes, not only an individual must be strong physically but also emotionally. If more women will work in such a field, there would have less fear amongst felons. As a consequence, the crime rate would increase exponentially.
Nevertheless, if the necessary pieces of training and prospects are provided, women can also perform well in the same way men do in these professions. To illustrate the point, Kiran Bedi, a notorious IPS officer of India who performed exceptionally as a police-officer and put several criminals behind the bars. Further, if women were given equal chance in these occupations, many people would be glad to provide a suitable education to their daughters. That would also promote female education to a greater extent. So the argument goes that if more women had given the chance in jobs like Police or Army, there would have more females who were pursuing this career path. This adds to women's empowerment.
In conclusion, although undoubtedly unlike men, women are less competent physically, which is a primary criterion for such jobs, i believe that these skills can be gained by regular training and there have been many incidents when women have proved their capabilities during such roles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h is a primary criterion for such jobs, i believe that these skills can be gained...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08615384615 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75990909721 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590769230769 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3807662665 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.2 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265023539181 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805139968551 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676329560766 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168369006506 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535776309406 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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