You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Describe the training course you want to do.
Explain what the company could do to help you.
Say how the course will be useful for your job.
I am writing to inform you about a soft course on the topic of international laws of medicine manufacturing, quality control, quality assurance, packaging and labelling. It’s came across my eyes last week in the portfolio of a German company.
Let me explain my situation in detail. Admission in this one month programme is not a cup of tea, it has some specific eligibility criteria and I’m quite lucky because I have prime requirements they need. I already applied for this trajectory but its need a endorsement letter from candidate's employee so that any ramification will be avoided in concern about workers company. In addition, they require a list of duties that I perform in my workplace from my manager.
Could I tell you, it is evitable for my career also, how it will be? Well, as my obligation is to inspect drugs on retail pharmacies, it will increase my chances to get promoted as a foreign drug inspector and a direct contact with various companies delegation because I would have known all the legislation of medicine world
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...pplied for this trajectory but its need a endorsement letter from candidates empl...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ector and a direct contact with various companies delegation because I would have known a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90449438202 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9250031157 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702247191011 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4515111228 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150248950683 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618696606258 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662970329938 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952292980453 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251815875787 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.