Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents are the best teachers Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Some people believe that parents are the best teachers in children's lives, however others think otherwise. The latter state that kids learn more when in high school than at home. In my opinion, younger students have more opportunities to learn when at school rather than at home.
First of all, there are many well-trained teachers who can assist children properly in a variety of subjects. For example, when I was in high school I had difficulties learning math. Luckily there were extra classes with special teachers who were capable of looking after my math skills. Not merely did they assist me but, also, they oversaw many other students alike. Thus, all of my drawbacks were solved by leaps and bounds.
Moreover, with many highly trained teachers and with plenty of time spent at school, chances are for pupils to succeed in life further. For instance, nowadays there are, in many countries, more students spending most of the time at school. We can mention Japan as one example, where students are dropped off at school early in the morning and picked up in the afternoon. Therefore, they will have a bunch of lessons to learn and, certainly, they will be more qualified than other part-time students.
Furthermore, there are many situations around the world where parents don't have sufficient knowledge and children do not spend much time at home. The latter, in most of the circumstances, is more in contact with teachers and other pupils than with their parents or caregivers. Then, it cannot be stated without doubt that parents are better educators than teachers.
Finally, after considering all the facts, it can be concluded that, nowadays, students spend more time with teachers and classmates rather than with their parents or caregivers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tuations around the world where parents dont have sufficient knowledge and children ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0618556701 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51311083677 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2923257608 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0625 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108732919502 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412268633471 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486633264242 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757127669668 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392737742051 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.6 Out of 6.0
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