Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent.
Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter:
– Describe the problem and why you are unhappy
– Arrange for an engineer to visit your home
– Request a reduction in your bill
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep puri, penning down this epistle to lodge a complaint regarding the pathetic service you are endowing to me.
A I am a professional ,so i have to respect the due dates of work but your internet connect become so fragile during the peak hours.
I have complained a lot about the poor speed and connectivity ,but all in vein.
I have been using your services since 2010, so I do not want to shift to another service providers.Thus, it would be highly appreciable if
you employ an expert engineer who would visit to my place and solve these hassles in my connection.I am also ready to pay any extra
charge for the services of troubleshooter.
Since , i have not received the promised service of high speed internet without any disconnection so it would not be ethically good if
would be charged for faulty facilities.It would be highly grateful if you reduced my monthly bill from Rs 1000 to Rs 200.
I am anticipating a positive and early response from your side.
Yours Faithfully,
Navdeep Puri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'A' or 'I'?
Suggestion: A; I
...thetic service you are endowing to me. A I am a professional ,so i have to respect...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e endowing to me. A I am a professional ,so i have to respect the due dates of wo...
^^
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ot about the poor speed and connectivity ,but all in vein. I have been using yo...
^^
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: IN_VEIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in vain' (=unsuccessfully)?
Suggestion: in vain
...he poor speed and connectivity ,but all in vein. I have been using your services sin...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...t to shift to another service providers.Thus, it would be highly appreciable if yo...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
....Thus, it would be highly appreciable if you employ an expert engineer who would...
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Line 8, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iable if you employ an expert engineer who would visit to my place and solve th...
^^
Line 8, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...nd solve these hassles in my connection.I am also ready to pay any extra charge ...
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Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay any extra charge for the services of troubleshooter. Since , i have not re...
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Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he services of troubleshooter. Since , i have not received the promised servic...
^^
Line 12, column 40, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... would be charged for faulty facilities.It would be highly grateful if you reduced...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8771724269 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.6290354937 44.8134815571 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.0 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220334239217 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107744672895 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523947392841 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830115360334 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378585243704 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.