Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
No doubt that these days’ people are confused about how to manage and control their life as technology is developing and things are going to be very complicated. Indeed, everyone should have a very specific plane for his/her life to gains the goals they desire, especially young people. In my point of view, having an ordinary plane is very essential. In this essay, I describe three main reasons to make the point clear.
First of all, because of the competition between young people, they need to have a plan to study and be educated at the right time. Otherwise, the will be behind their friends in same age, as a result they can’t find finish their college in the age that should be and can’t go to market. For example, a person who finished college at age 22, and gets to the market same time is much better than a person who finished college at age 32. So always a big competition is there to find good circumstances in the industry.
Secondly, everyone need to establish a family with getting married, so if you have the ability to have a plan in your life and get a good job, thus you can start thinking about marriage because job and money are the main criteria to start a family. For instance, a person with a good job and a good salary can easily think about having a partner because he had planned from the first day of study and finding a job, but if in each step you are late and not on time, definitely, being loser is your destiny.
Last but not least, things never happen in life by chance, having a plane and being organized can make life very reasonable. So, when the plan is the most important step, never confuse about what is next step to jump. Always know what to do without any fair. That means every step in life will happen at its own time perfectly because your mind is getting ready to handle all events which need to happen. To make this more clear, if you plane that in age 22, you will graduate and in age 23 start working and in age 30 you get married, as a result by age 35 you have family and money and job but whom doesn’t have such things will be late and never can be happy for what he/she gains.
To sum up, base on science young people without the plane never get happy with their life and never gain what they want on time. In addition, they always confuse in their life and always unhappy.
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- tpo 46 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3416856492 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16902667315 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464692482916 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1287200184 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.117647059 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8235294118 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209464967797 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070662021292 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531962575697 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122572407456 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445948420259 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.