Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree
The large appearance of supermarket in some country might bring people many advantages. However, some people claim that with the expansion of supermarket; many small, local businesses are forced to compete the shopping mall. As the result, small, local businesses cannot beat the rival and they need to be closed and that closure will make local community to be collapsed. From my point of view, I strongly disagree with that statement.
Firstly, supermarket bring people the convenience that small store cannot have. People can buy everything that they need in one building only. Many services take place in one area such as cinema, drinks, food store and many daily services will help people save much of their time due to travelled distances between stores are removed. Secondly, people can purchase variable of products parallel with manufacture can sell their goods without legal issue. Big square can ensure the origin place that the stock come from that will protect the brands also customers. Last but not least, the price and the diversity of products in mart will bring people more choices than local store. For example, many types of fruit such as apple is imported due to big company have bigger investment.
On the other hand, the disappearance of small store will bring some negative perspective. Although many services take place under one proof, the distance people need to reach supermarket will be longer than local mart. It will make people not prefer buying fresh food every day, they will buy canned food or freezing food which contain less nutrition and taste which contrast with convenience store. Moreover, no brand products can easily be sold at local store and it will make more jobs and unique goods to consumers. Lastly, mall is crowded due to it is a large complex. Many people come to small building will decrease the quality of services and the most important it will spread the danger of disease especially this time is the peak of Covid-19.
In conclusion, although local mart will bring some advantages to people, the development of supermarket is definitely crucial due to its benefits. The local communities cannot be killed by the rapid expansion of supermarket if local authorities have some right policy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06199460916 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48791880409 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522911051213 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0094100445 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8421052632 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374092338728 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125052359627 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991525633332 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280530576941 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111841531736 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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