The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
The world has been suffering from the burning issue of the global warming which plays vital role in global concerns. Owing to this, it is always debatable question that with the help of hiking cost of fuel is the good method to reduce issue regarding environment. I will discuss pros and cons of the given notion before giving a final note.
In the inception, there are ample benefits of increasing price of fuel. The predominant advantage is reducing pollution. To be more precise, if authority rise cost of petrol then people could try to find other way of commuting like public transportation. As a result, they can avoid to use their private vehicle and prefer either public vehicle or carpooling. For example, car pooling is the best option when government increases the cost of petrol. Hence, pollution will be decreased automatically. Second benefit is, people will find other way of travelling such as electrical vehicle or they choose walking while short distance which is helpful not only for their health but also for environment. So increasing the cost of fuel is the best way to reduce world's environmental problem.
on the contrary, in spite of having many benefits of increasing cost of fuel, there are some other ways to solve environmental problem. Initially, government should levy more taxes on those companies and factories which produces more detrimental gases on air as well as water in order to increase price of fuel because most of the company release more harmful gases compared to vehicles. Another way is, campaign should be organised by regime to aware public instead of rising price of petrol. What is more, price of other goods will also increase whether government rise cost of fuel which directly affect on any country's economy.
To recapitulate, although there are some ways to reduce environmental issue in terms of applying more taxes, starting awareness programs, I tend to deem that increasing cost of fuel is the good way to decrease this problem like finding other way of travelling as well as helpful for their health and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, second, so, then, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99135446686 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67788013767 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547550432277 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.800322492 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263802137446 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950407597579 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988950096707 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161110461781 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364566356653 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.