Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
in what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Human beings are social animals as this communication is part of their lives. There are many approaches in the form of technology used by people to communicate with other people. Needless to say it is a positive development that nowadays people can interact anywhere and anytime. Furthermore , deu to this Hi-Tech technology relationship between people become more health.
To access this point how the technology affected the relationship there are different ways. Among them using electrical components, family as well as friendly relation has immense benefit in terms of regularity. For an example, nowadays using mobile phones daily person can be in touch with their relatives. In addition to this people could be in touch with anyone no matter where they live.
In addition, automation used by people have definitely positive development among them. Telecommunication become more beneficial to the people because nowadays physical distance between them increase day by day. For an instant, my cousin live in US ; Although we are doing phone calls as well as message everyday. Moreover, people can also see their dear ones through the video call this is become possible due to applied science.
In conclusion , today world is dominite with technology and everyone use this to communicate to their relatives. As my observation it is beneficial for the people that they can interact with anyone using this electronic components even the longest distance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36086956522 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88740105643 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.3222753843 49.4020404114 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330871834407 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12153775949 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793105147576 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214739200773 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086942861471 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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