Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
People all around the world use different language to communicate with each other. Some people believe that living foreign country where language differs with yours can cause antisocial issues. Although this situation makes difficulties to immigrants, I think, people have tendency to cope with difficulties.
The noticeable issue is connected with their work experiences. It is obvious that people have to work for living. It might become difficult to find suitable job in abroad, but immigrant can do online working in order to pay their daily expenditures until learning local language. Furthermore, if they have come from country where English is first language might help them to work big companies.
On the one hand, become resident in overseas might occur noticeable hardness to immigrants. While people live in this condition they might be struggle with situation when the have to communicate with local people. For instance, they might ask about location of market or bus station. If they do not know local language, they might become embarrassed and do not talk. This kind of situations make tendency to people to become antisocial. However, incomers can solve this issue by attending language centers and trainings, so they can gain knowledge not also for learning communication, but also collect some work experience.
To sum up, although living abroad without communication skills is difficult, after a period the immigrant can improve his own language experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, i think, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39224137931 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80032790143 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7291089176 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187020754267 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694694727262 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588715378405 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119785667356 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486468284565 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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