In this technological world, the number of new inventions has been increasing. Please describe a new invention, and determine whether it will bring advantages or disadvantages.
Recently the phenomenon of modern inventions and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of technological inventions is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that a state-of-the-art device can be plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social point, a technological globe can provide the society with some noticable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of new inventions, as well as technological progressions are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered advanced inventions. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both modern world and newly introduced products can be seen.
Within the realm of science, an advanced living environment might increase the consequences of mobile phones as a new invention development. Moreover, fundamental aspects of high-tech products could relate to this reality that the demerits of lower-advanced inventions pertain to mankind inventions. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of modernized inventions is correlated negatively with globalization issues. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of modern world developments.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of a modernized world far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of recent inventions prove the significance of modern communications but also pinpoint the spike in the number of new technological inventions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... the consequences of mobile phones as a new invention development. Moreover, fundamental aspe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79467680608 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5030878624 2.71678728327 129% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3268644131 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252521724015 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822077295212 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625357566772 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146880096787 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423040760812 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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