All students ought to study art and music in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Art and music are an integral part of human being, and this brings out the controversy whether these mandatory in school or not. Although there are some robust altercations against, nevertheless, I confide that art and music have to be a subject in school for students. However, I shall scrutinies my points in a subsequent essay.
On the one hand, there is a feasible reason why people might argue to not include art in school is a waste of time. Masses deem, learning and practising art at school students misuse their time which they can use to gain some practical tasks. They also opine that schools should only focus on science and technology. And owing to which, students can be efficacious; thus, the country will be benignant.
On the other hand, despite the above arguments, I still uphold the view that students need to study arts and music. There are two prime epistemology why I state for that. The first and foremost contention behind is, abolishing stress. Students of the contemporary world live a stressful life where they are getting pressurised because of their study. Art and music can help them to get off it if they practice the art and listen to music in their spare time.
Eventually, students become better concentrator when they live on art as well as music. They can boosts their self-esteem easily trough art and music. And to do all that, schools ought to provide art and music to their students. Take an example of all those students who got success in their life. All of them are hard worker, but what made them these easy is along of art and music.
In conclusion, it can not be repudiated that science and technology play a significant roll in our life, but I surmise to get inspire, students should focus on art and music.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 97, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'boost'
Suggestion: boost
... live on art as well as music. They can boosts their self-esteem easily trough art and...
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Line 8, column 76, Rule ID: LEAD_ROLL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'significant role'?
Suggestion: significant role
...ated that science and technology play a significant roll in our life, but I surmise to get inspi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71521035599 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54940192053 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0138858761 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326668149926 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104084129083 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837454341131 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177967515746 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823454014808 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 97, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'boost'
Suggestion: boost
... live on art as well as music. They can boosts their self-esteem easily trough art and...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 76, Rule ID: LEAD_ROLL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'significant role'?
Suggestion: significant role
...ated that science and technology play a significant roll in our life, but I surmise to get inspi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71521035599 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54940192053 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0138858761 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326668149926 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104084129083 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837454341131 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177967515746 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823454014808 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.