Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that museums are places for entertainment. Others, however, feel that the main role of museums is regarded as a school for educating people. From my point of view, museums should be a combination of both entertaining and educational
On the one hand, many people assume that the essential role of a museum is to entertain. Museum is a famous place for sightseers, these people come here to enhance their mental and emotional health; therefore, museums aiming to exhibit the collection of exciting and valuable objects that a multitude of visitors may willing to see, and those who visit the museums will get bored and tired easily if they have to listen or read far too much educational content, as a result, the museum is designed to be visually spectacular so that visitor may feel interested. For instance, many museums created interactive activities or even games as part of their exhibitions.
On the other hand, a large number of people claim that it is important for museums to play as an educational institution. The ultimate purposes of any exhibition are raising people’s awareness about the history, things that they did not previously know; therefore, museums should serve not only the locals but also foreign holidaymakers. Those who be attracted by Vietnam cultures and histories are more likely to stop at museums first. As an example, Ho Chi Minh Museum, which is located in district 3 of Ho Chi Minh city, emphasizes teaching each citizen how long, arduous and challenging it was for Uncle Ho to led Vietnamese people win the war.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that museums play a part and parcel role in people’s lives, people can have fun and learn something at the same time
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96551724138 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80742179276 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.46426099 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36219627828 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150931319911 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819479524983 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225901896915 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041215686664 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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