Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?
What is your view on this?
Give reasons for your answer.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, more and more students are going to foreign countries to acquire academic knowledge and widen their horizons. They think that the qualifications gained abroad can be open the door to better job opportunities and future careers. In one's opinion, studying abroad has advantages and disadvantages on its own.
Firstly, people see this opportunity as developing communication skills and their professional life. In recent years, gaining an education in foreign countries has become one of the essential requirements for people who are applying for jobs. Furthermore, widening communication networks through learning new cultures helps students to think in different ways.
Secondly, living away from home and doing things on their own in foreign countries has positive impacts on a student's life. By managing financial problems and making vital decisions by themselves, the students are likely to benefit in organizing their lives independently.
On the other hand, obtaining higher education in different countries can be highly expensive for academic learners who are from middle-class or lower-class families. They usually face obstacles to funding their studies by doing part-time jobs. This problem may lead to distractions of attention to their studies. Moreover, living away from loved ones and their country can be emotionally challenging for young adults. There is a probability that the students will get homesick or be unable to continue with their studies due to the pressures they face abroad.
To conclude, studying in foreign countries gives students opportunities to develop personal and academic skills. Nevertheless, we should consider its drawbacks before pursuing a foreign education.
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70703125 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03802550994 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6072454258 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185330885881 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662601612194 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367468724046 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103795405804 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269392700177 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.