Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The creation of computers has changed human's life forever and that has become a highly charged topic. Many people strongly believe that the machine is the greatest invention in the last hundred years while others disprove that opinion. I contend that computers play a pivotal role in modern life yet the most.
Admittedly, there are some benefits that computers offer to people's life. To begin with, this type of machines can accelerate work's efficiency by multiple times. For instance, accountants now use the programmes Excel to calculate employee's monthly wages, which is automatic and much more accurate than in the past when they had to write down every numbers and added themselves . Furthermore, with the appreance of the computer, the way of entertainment has also been increased. Many people nowadays can sit in front of the computer and play video games if they do not feel like going out.
Despite the arguments mentioned above, there are some of other inventions I believe that they are more essential than the computer, one of them is the electricity. With the help of it, people can see clearly at night by turning on the light, or at least they need the electricity to start the computer. Additionally, many jobs such as manufacturing and technology may be placing too much reliance on computers, which somehow abates labor force, rendering people lose their jobs and become unemployed.
To conclude, after analyzed from multiple perspectives, the creation of computers are undeniably important. However, peole should not overlook other outstanding inventions and rely too much on computers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...e some benefits that computers offer to peoples life. To begin with, this type of machi...
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Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... down every numbers and added themselves . Furthermore, with the appreance of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, while, at least, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18846153846 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7643512212 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5528652445 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111163154761 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039476991229 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233908051101 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682442667686 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279833929283 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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