The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram illustrates the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
There are two stages of production, they are cement and concrete production. In the cement production, it demonstrates how raw materials are used in manufacturing cement while concrete production shows how cement is used with other materials to produce concrete.
The first diagram demonstrates the stages in the production of cement. At the initial stage, two raw materials are used, which are limestone and clay. The two materials are placed in a crusher which grinds it into powdered substance. Then it is passed through a mixer which merges the two powdered materials together. The substance is transfered from the mixer to a rotating heater where profuse heat is applied to it. Then the raw cement material is passed on a grinder to finally produce the cement. Finally, the cement is packed in bags and ready to be sold.
The second diagram shows how cement is used in producing concrete for building purposes. from the diagram, there are four requirements for concrete production. They are cement, water, sand and gravel. Each material has a percentage to contribute in the production of concrete. The materials are placed inside a concrete mixer which merges them to produce concrete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
...oducing concrete for building purposes. from the diagram, there are four requirement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17431192661 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81973935966 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43119266055 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2124084053 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510557805115 0.215688989381 237% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189323491703 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.225440541598 0.0843802449381 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.428590978198 0.15604864568 275% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.229387916424 0.0819641961636 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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