Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Since the creation of civilization, people all over the world have been trying to improve their prosperity and sufficiency by means of hard work. An opinion exists that when choosing a profession wage is considered to be far more determining compared with the feeling of self-realization. I completely disagree with the above mentioned statement due to the reasons mentioned hereinafter.
Firstly, I am convinced that adults who enjoy employment have higher motivation and might propose new exciting ideas as a feeling of passion is undeniable. In recent, times staff members have always been highly valued within corporations due to their ability to earn more money for the company. For example, many articles write that Bill Gates has always been highly passionate about science and computers, which helped him found Microsoft - the greatest company of all time. Thus, enjoyment of your own duties is beneficial both from a personal satisfaction point of view and financial perspective.
Secondly, nowadays individuals whose only goal is substantial paycheck may experience lots of stress, which can lead to negative consequences on their personal wellbeing. For employers, these occasions are also unfavorable as colleagues who are constantly struggling with various misfortunes tend to miss business days. For instance, my uncle was obsessed with dividends after he graduated from university at the age of 25 and when he was 30, he suffered from nervous breakdown. Hence, solely chasing wealth and bonuses in a professional environment could have an irretrievable impact on one’s welfare.
Taking everything into consideration, focusing on salary is less important than job fulfillment, since many negative effects could occur through a lifespan when a person fixates purely on wages. Excitement obtained from inspirational projects, as well as a lack of anxiety, maximizes self-contentment and minimizes possible diseases, which makes job satisfaction a clear winner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59666666667 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14460558362 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706666666667 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8736117885 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 129.153846154 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107500279721 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309372521643 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500680732001 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666253186025 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778987648562 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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