Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
Unfortunately, today, many people especially those who are originally from developing and under developing countries immigrate to some developed countries. In fact, there are some reasons behind this event. In this essay, two main causes of immigration coupled with its influence on the society will been discussed.
As a matter of fact, nowadays, particularly in the recent decade, immigration from some countries especially, Asian and African countries to some developed countries in Europe, Australia and Canada has extensively increased. As one of the main reasons of expatriation, wars that happened among countries can have the most important role. To illustrate this vividly, recently, there were numerous wars in some countries in the Middle East including Iraq, Syria and Yemen. Indeed, during this period, a huge number of individuals lost their accommodation and their job. Therefore, many people of war-torn countries seek asylum until they can peacefully live in another county. Furthermore, the other reason of immigration might be due to the unemployment in some countries. In fact, in some nations especially, poorer nations, there are not much job opportunities for all people. Moreover, in some other countries due to the recession, many factories would go to the bankrupt and many clients would lose their job. Therefore, many of them especially youngsters decide to immigrate to some sophisticated countries to find a job position.
Undoubtedly, the extension of immigration can make some difficulties for communities. As one of the most negative impact, immigration will dramatically increase the rate of population in some areas. When this happens, the authorities encounter some challenges. Firstly, the authority have to put a substantial funding to provide some facilities such as health care service and education for immigrants that it is too costly. Secondly, the government have to make some job positions for immigrants and quite sadly, in some cases, there are not job positions available for all people. Although, some immigrants are employed as a worker in some factories, they have to work in long hours with at least salary. In fact, because the authorities have not supported them, some employees would exploit them.
To conclude, I am personally of the opinion that wars and unemployment are two main reasons that some people immigrate to other countries. In fact, they seek a peaceful life in a haven place. However, the consequences of immigration might be disappointing if it extensively continue to some certain countries.
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Suggestion: continues
...ight be disappointing if it extensively continue to some certain countries.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44862155388 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07023170119 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3389892821 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8181818182 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1363636364 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172923550188 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648284140084 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568452680569 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132313627776 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291124299693 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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