As you have had a long break and been free from school due to the worldwide spread of a new fatal disease, you may have a chance to reflect on many diferent things in life. What do you think are the positive and negative aspects found ?
We are on the longest holiday ever. It is not only a simple Tet holiday but also a “legendary” vacation for us to isolate ourselves and deal with an extremely dangerous new enemy that is Covid 19. It can be said that covid 19 is really a deadly epidemic outbreak in Wuhan, China. It petrify for mankind because of its extremely fast rate of spread and the number of infections in other countries is increasing. That plague has caused negative consequences for many aspects of our lives.
Firstly, the corona virus has claimed the lives of thousands of people around the world. According to statistics, the death rate in China, where the outbreak has reached its peak. Next is the countries like Korea, Italy, Japan, etc . Secondly, this epidemic has seriously affected the global economy. For example, China is a big market to consume our country's agricultural products such as watermelon, dragon fruit, etc. When an epidemic occurs, these items cannot be exported to China, causing sluggishness. Thus, many goods are sold at low prices, causing economic losses to farmers. Thirdly, it causes prolonged absences in many schools. In the face of a growing epidemic, many schools have dropped out to control and avoid an increase in infections. Long-term absences make students nevous, especially seniors. Nevertheless, one should accept that, the disease also creates some advantages for us. It inadvertently gives us a break to separate and isolate from life. This is probably a great time to reflect on the past and make informed plans for the future. This holiday is also seen as an opportunity for us to spend time taking care of ourselves and our family after a long time of hard work. Moreover, we will appreciate life and do more meaningful work for the community and society.
In conclusion, Covid 19 is a dangerous global epidemic and we cannot predict when it will stop completely. This plague brings us many advantages as well as disadvantages. What we can do now is strengthen our resistance by exercising and social distancing to combat this century's epidemic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...adly epidemic outbreak in Wuhan, China. It petrify for mankind because of its extr...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'petrifies'?
Suggestion: petrifies
...y epidemic outbreak in Wuhan, China. It petrify for mankind because of its extremely fa...
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Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... countries like Korea, Italy, Japan, etc . Secondly, this epidemic has seriously a...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'strengthened'.
Suggestion: strengthened
...as disadvantages. What we can do now is strengthen our resistance by exercising and social...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9855907781 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79646574032 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608069164265 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7725466976 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2173913043 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0869565217 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21739130435 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932335616402 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260590752162 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303775561661 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583894314051 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200874969425 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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