Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued by some that the present situation of environmental degradation is a global issue. Therefore, some believe it should be the responsibility of the government to resolve it, whereas others are of the opinion that people should deal with the problem. In my perspective, issues pertaining to our planet should be resolved by the government and the people on their own respective levels.
To begin with, there should be active participation of the policymakers to protect our planet from any form of harm. Lawmakers should focus on issues like pollution and wastage that cause damage to our ecology and act towards solving them. Firstly, the pollution caused by fumes from manufacturing factories and emission released by motor vehicles can be regulated by the government laws. There should be strict regulations and penalties on companies to make sure they are following protocol. Secondly, Cars engines and certain components of air conditioners and washing machine often release toxic gases like carbon dioxide in the air, which can be hazardous to the ozone layer. There should be strict laws and certifications to check if the equipment can cause any damage to the environment.
Individual effort should also be involved in saving the environment. They can start by curbing the use of single-use plastic and replacing them with sustainable alternatives such as paper and bamboo. Plastic cups, plates, etc are non-biodegradable and do not decompose with time, additionally, once they are released in the sea, it affects the marine lives as well. Moreover, individual cooperation towards the laws meant for environment conservation can be a good initiative. Those who follow government rules such as saving energy, reusable shopping bags or by not littering are also helpful in supporting the ecosystem.
To sum up, in the current scenario, the world is facing the threat of environmental degradation and this can be tackled with the cooperation of the government and their citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30503144654 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05573822411 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6153268034 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.466666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237104474577 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807449490457 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877042976688 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142188865987 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10442067594 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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