In some countries, children have very strict rules of behavior while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent children have to follow the rules?
A person can be judged by his/her moral values. While one group give freedom to their youngsters, others are hindering their behavior by make them follow rules. In this essay, I will discuss this conundrum and give my consent.
First, who think rules hinder personality making of their children. Well, An advantage to this, that you can make your own decision on some personal career making or if it is your future that you want to be. For example, if you want to become a doctor then you are free to study whatever you want but you have to be steady on it and yes, it is your choice and you can never blame others. A disadvantage, let me explain it with an example, in America if a children calls and say that his/her parents are abusing him/her then cops will come and put their parents away and handcuff them. There might be another reason for their action or let us consider that they didn’t do anything & the children going to do an overall negligence impact on our children behavior.
Second, who thinks rules can make their children obedient and lawful. A child who has to follow rules must have etiquettes comparing to the children who have no one to make them realize what is wrong and what is right. Children can manage their time appropriately as their parents helping them to concentrate and sort between preferable and non-preferable tasks or what is necessary on the specific time. They take advice from their guardians, teachers, relatives and know how to react on every situation according the rules they have to follow. For example, they will resolve their problem by their rules and not involved any third person in between their elders. A disadvantages is that their some work or decision are influenced by other people or government. Therefore, they can feel their selves helpless or lack of confidence but they can make their elders agree by giving some reasonable aspect to their thinking.
In the nutshell, extremism in any situation can cause harm so there should be something that must be obeyed by laws and other things must show leniency by laws so that, children should not feel his/herself suffocated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 666, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A disadvantage' or simply 'disadvantages'?
Suggestion: A disadvantage; Disadvantages
...y third person in between their elders. A disadvantages is that their some work or decision are...
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Line 5, column 682, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...n between their elders. A disadvantages is that their some work or decision are in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, well, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 24.0651302605 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78648648649 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51097806872 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535135135135 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7307537397 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245807328691 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900608046486 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704054617139 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126181085219 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789668599976 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.