The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The given chart illustrates the average temperatures in each month of the year and the table presents the total sunshine hours in three big cities: London, New York, and Sydney.
Overall, there are distinct trends in all figures.
As can be seen from the graph, London and New York witnessed a strong increase from the beginning of the year to July in the escalation of the temperatures, with respective beings just under 30 and approximately 24. In contrast, the average number falls dramatically by 10 to a trough of 16 in Sydney during the first 7 months period.
Moving on to the rest of the year, there is a quick decline in the number of this measurement in London and New York. When London experiences a decrease at under 10, New York goes through a fall by 25, from 30 to 5; meanwhile, there is a sharp climb to 25 in December’s average temperatures in Sydney.
Although New York contains a large number of months having low temperatures it has the highest amount of sunshine hours well over 2500. These figures of Sydney and London are lower than New York, with respective being nearly 2500 and approximately 1200.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r’s average temperatures in Sydney. Although New York contains a large number of mon...
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Line 8, column 28, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... Sydney. Although New York contains a large number of months having low temperatures it has t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, well, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73737373737 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74137766737 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580808080808 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3237777911 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231825829325 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105717800341 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999454056009 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132467753036 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104303361546 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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