Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.
In this contemporary era the trend of exploring places with troublesome conditions is possible among people. Tourists often find it interesting to experience something different. This essay will list down the various merits and demerits of visiting places such as Sahara desert or The Antarctica.
The prime benefit which tourists derive by visiting odd places is a feeling of adventure. Some people are very fond of doing the activities which gives them thrill and excitement. In this regard, locations with abnormal conditions act as an attraction for those who love to experiment new things. Secondly, visiting these kinds of places people become aware of the difference in normal life and hard life of organisms prevailing there. Moreover, if one has to experience the nature closely then these type of locations are best suited. To exemplify, tourists who visit the forests of Bangladesh can closely see the habitat, variety of plants and environment of that place.
On the contrary, there are some drawbacks of visiting the place with awkward circumstances. Firstly, there is lack of medical facilities in case of any emergency. In the other words, if a person gets hurt, or caught by some animal or even faces problem to breathe can never seek help in any nearby place quickly. For instance, it has been reported in an article of Tribune, that most of the people who climb Mt Everest faced the problem of breathing and was unable to get help in required time which resulted in severe respiratory problems and sometimes even death. Secondly, in such places there is not adequate facility of transportation, and telecommunication as well. Consequently, it can be prone to the lives of tourists which can make them helpless in the situation of help or any risk.
To conclude, although it is favorable for those who can adjust with the situation of the places where people rarely go, but for some it can pose a risk to their life and health.It generally depend on the choice of a person what he goes for and how he can manage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93294460641 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78175975237 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562682215743 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3089757199 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299017309608 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958476457029 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781981003626 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178942770225 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558868003589 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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