The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
History is a common subject as part of a school's curriculum all over the world. Why do people study history? Some people argue that history is not required to be taught as one should always look towards the future. On the other hand, there are arguments that history is a crucial subject to be taught especially to young minds. So why is the study of history important or beneficial? Because it helps people understand the mistakes made in the past and to not repeat it again. As the famous saying goes "Learn from your past mistakes". And so I personally feel that is the main benefit of the study of history and not to dispel the illusion that the present people are different from older times. Of course, that is one of the
benefits but is not the significant one.
History provides people with information about the past developments of the country, wars waged including those lost and won, etc. The Indian history mainly includes the fight for freedom against the British and it helps understand the difficulties people faced at that period and how it was important to not lose determination. The freedom fight is a piece of inspiration for all the Indians even now and leaders such as Gandhi are celebrated until today worldwide. This is what the study of history is supposed to afford, a source of inspiration.
Moreover, great wars such as World War 1 and 2 provides information about the deaths of thousands of people. It involves the political mistakes done by self-centered leaders across the world which lead to huge destruction. This serves as a learning opportunity for people about the effects of war, and the wrongdoings and selfishness that resulted in these cataclysms. People are more aware now and question the authority to prevent useless wars from being fought. The history makes this awareness possible and deters people from making the same mistake again.
In addition, the culture of a country is portrayed beautifully in its history. Monuments, museums and artifacts are preserved meticulously for visitors from around the world to understand the cultural aspects of a nation. It is vital that people never forget where they come from and what they stand for. To perpetuate this, every citizen is supposed to know the history of their nation and what better way than to teach students while they are in school.
To conclude, the study of history contributes to a number of advantages and as reasoned above, these benefits prove more significant than just to differentiate people from different times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, while, in addition, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97423887588 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74054920433 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515222482436 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9534753783 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.347826087 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5652173913 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73913043478 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246236165216 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724445637433 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641721150801 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13093921123 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481754958203 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.