You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There is a argument that recent building constructions in big cities should be kept under government's supervision, while other assume that finance providers should be the ones to design freely. This essay will discuss both views and propose my opinion.
On the one hand, the owners of the building should design it to their will. First, buildings are considered private property according to many countries' regulations, which gives ones who finance them the right to construct freely. Regardless of purposes, this freedom gives residents the feelings of comfort and convenience, as they are in control of their surrounding environment. Second, diverse building designs is a way to express builders' creativity, possibly giving the urban landscape a remarkable impression. This provides a chance to boost local business with tourism, leading to the development in financial and cultural values.
On the other hand, newly constructions should comply to and be controlled by government to certain extents. First, the building must not violate the surrounding area, regarding other people's rights and the protection public property. Owners are not allowed to have design that affect others' legal possessions, for example building upper levels that spread to neighbors' land. They are also not permitted to choose designs that goes against the overall landscape of the regions, which can be offensive designs that are not suitable for public demonstrate. Second, constructions also have to serve legal purposes. For example, offices, schools and museums are some of the types allowed by laws, but centers for extreme religious or illegal production of stimulants are strictly prohibited.
In conclusion, while building owners have the right to design to their own will, it must be put under government's control according to laws and regulations.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
There is a argument that recent building construct...
^
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ions in big cities should be kept under governments supervision, while other assume that fi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'builders'' or 'builder's'?
Suggestion: builders'; builder's
...se building designs is a way to express builders creativity, possibly giving the urban l...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 658, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ample, offices, schools and museums are some of the types allowed by laws, but centers for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, regarding, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50704225352 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84991220974 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7353175943 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411200727413 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133475875671 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120753995595 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254607320187 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853487914422 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
There is a argument that recent building construct...
^
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ions in big cities should be kept under governments supervision, while other assume that fi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'builders'' or 'builder's'?
Suggestion: builders'; builder's
...se building designs is a way to express builders creativity, possibly giving the urban l...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 658, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ample, offices, schools and museums are some of the types allowed by laws, but centers for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, regarding, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50704225352 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84991220974 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7353175943 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411200727413 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133475875671 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120753995595 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254607320187 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853487914422 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.