The level of noise around us is constantly increasing, and affecting the quality of our lives. What causes this noise? What should be done about it?
It is argued that the quality of living has been impacted because of a rise in the level of sound. This essay will argue that the main cause of this is an increase in road traffic, and the possible solution is to plant more trees.
The primary reason for a surge in sound level nowadays is because the number of vehicles on road has increased than earlier. This is to say that sound produced by tires on breaking, speed acceleration, noise from the engine, and honking is the main source of sound pollution on-road and the level of noise is increasing with additional numbers of cars being added on the street frequently. For example, as per research in Vietnam there are 5000 vehicles which include two-wheelers and four-wheelers are added on to the road and therefore increasing the sound level to 55 decibels during peak hours.
The most viable solution to combat the increasing level of noise is by planting trees on both sides of the road. This is to say that dense trees or shrubs would act as a noise absorber and would absorb unpleasant sound produced by motor cars. For instance, as per research by James Hopkins University, planting two rows broad leaves trees or hollies shrubs beside roads will help to reduce the sound level by 7-decibel levels. A perfect example is a city of Mumbai, wherein 2019 the overall city noise level was reduced by 4 decibels in the following year because of planting 1 million trees throughout the city.
In conclusion, the chief problem for a surge in unwanted sound is due to motor vehicles on roads, but it can be addressed by growing trees as they are an antidote to noise pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69444444444 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49713377362 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9677444855 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.2 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196044874403 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894868956628 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442166575749 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124302042861 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317025429763 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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