Nowadays more and more business meetings and business trainings are taking place online.Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Time is altering and so the influential role of the Internet in different aspects of people’s lives from all walks of life. Teleconference and tele training have become commonly prevalent amongst businessmen over the last decades, the world over. Although this worldwide trend is stringently refuted by some, owing to instability in Internet connection, it will be proven by this essay that the unavoidable boons of this global phenomenon will prevail over its feasible demerits. In other words, online business meetings and trainings can act as a catalyst for individuals to save their time, especially ones living in densely populated urban areas. Throughout the following paragraphs, these points will be meticulously scrutinized to advocate the latter adequately logical standpoint.
It is sternly postulated by some that holding conferences and vocational training online can act as a precursor to some insurmountable obstacles in terms of unexpected internet interruption, contributing to diminishing the importance of a meeting and job training, on the one side. Take a momentous video conference between Tesla Company and Iran Khodro Car Manufacturer, postponed for another day due to a low-speed Internet connection in Iran, two years ago, as an illustration. Doing so, not only did this issue reduce the seriousness of the meeting, but it tarnished the image of Iran Khodro Company. It is, thus, exemplified by this glaringly apparent instance that online business meetings and job learning can be considered as a disadvantageous one for entrepreneurs because of the unforeseen Internet disconnection.
Inasmuch as traffic congestion has become a serious problem in numerous countries, should meetings and occupant training take place face-to-face instead of virtually, this approach, without a shadow of a doubt, can catalyze a waste of precious time, on the other hand. A 29-year old electrical engineer, obliged by his manager to participate in a two-day intensive course on Artificial Intelligence in person in Tehran City, spent a hefty amount of her time on commuting because of traffic jams, to illustrate. Had she attended an online course, categorically, she would have saved her time and made the best use of it for productive purposes. By shedding a light on this example, it is crystal clear than the more virtual business meetings and job trainings, the more time employees will be able to save. This recent trend, therefore, can constitute a method of time-saving by avoiding business trips.
To recapitulate, after the careful situational analysis of the probable drawback and undeniable virtue of the reaping the benefits of the Internet for business conferences and business trainings in terms of interrupted Internet connection and time-saving, respectively, it seems that the merits of this manner are more than its cons. Based on the aforementioned compelling grounds, it is, hence, hoped these points of paramount significance will be taken into account by freelancers in the foreseeable future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 605, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ividuals to save their time, especially ones living in densely populated urban areas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2569.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 469.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4776119403 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1958697278 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 176.041082164 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584221748401 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 825.3 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1115298189 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.5625 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3125 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256965135642 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766994515293 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730635259292 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150378840709 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317690151354 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 78.4519038076 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.